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writerjay89


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Posted: 10 Mar 2010 07:55 PM       Subject: The Tears On Her Pillow
the first song i have ever written
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1. These tears on her pillow
tells it how she feels
on how she thought
she could make it on her own
but now she just wants to give up
she needs to realize
she was never made to walk alone

Chorus:
She just wants a place to belong
A place to fin in
A place to feel needed
someone to care
someone who'll understand her
will you be there?
she just needs a helping hand
she just needs a helping hand

2. These tears on her pillow
are her only friends
they tell the pillow everything
and on how she wishes
the pain to just end

Chorus:
She just wants a place to belong
A place to fin in
A place to feel needed
someone to care
someone who'll understand her
will you be there?
she just needs a helping hand
she just needs a helping hand

3. Ask her how shes doing
and she'll say that she's fine
but don't believe her
don't her believe
cuz shes really dying inside
dying inside

Chorus:
She just wants a place to belong
A place to fin in
A place to feel needed
someone to care
someone who'll understand her
will you be there?
she just needs a helping hand
she just needs a helping hand

She just wants a place to belong
A place to fin in
A place to feel needed
someone to care
someone who'll understand her
will you be there?
she just needs a helping hand
she just needs a helping hand
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please comment



daniellexx5xx


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Posted: 10 Mar 2010 09:32 PM         Subject: RE: The Tears On Her Pillow
I really really like this.
It's good. :3

And I can really relate to it.
Good job!
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dolphingurl94


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Posted: 11 Mar 2010 01:20 PM         Subject: RE: The Tears On Her Pillow
thats good and you should write more songs. great job.
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Posted: 11 Mar 2010 09:26 PM         Subject: RE: The Tears On Her Pillow
I Agree you should write more songs
this is really good (:
keep up the good writing.

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